Tried some things here. Tons of extremely short dialog in the first half. In the second half, every sentence starts with “I”. https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2210964-Forks
Tried some things here. Tons of extremely short dialog in the first half. In the second half, every sentence starts with “I”. https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2210964-Forks